I didn't think it was bad. But I think it's been done. And overdone. I think what would be cooler is if you showed yourself in the process of tracking it, making it all work. The "I'm every band member" video isn't a bad approach. But I think I'd be far more interested in seeing the process. Maybe if you did a "making of" that went with it. Did you do the drums first? Guitar?
As far as the material goes, it's fine. I don't want to hurt your feelings, because it's not bad. If it was on the radio, I wouldn't change it. But it didn't particularly grab me. Pleasant, but inessential. Better than anything I can do, I can tell you that!
Not a bad song! Pretty catchy. Vocals are a little "kiddie" sounding, but if that's what you're good at, then keep doing it that way. The singing is still better than anything I could do. I'd say just ignore us critics and keep on making music the way you want to make it!!
Good job! Reminds me of the Elephant Six and Kindercore Records era and all those great bands I saw back then. Vocals are great. They don't have to be perfect. You should be proud and keep singing.
Pretty good actually! Like someone said in the comments above, you should make a "making of" for the video! :) I actually think the song isn't that bad! The more you try, the better you'll get! You should post more x)
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Very nice DIY video!!!
The song would be far better as an instrumental pice!
lovely lovely!
I enjoyed it. haha. The song reminds me of a song by The Cure..or maybe The Chills.
Nice dude.
Great!
It's crap, son.
I enjoyed the first comment: "The song would be far better as an instrumental piece". So true. The voices are gosh-darned AWFUL.
sorry you don't like it paul. perhaps i should give up singing all together!
I didn't think it was bad. But I think it's been done. And overdone. I think what would be cooler is if you showed yourself in the process of tracking it, making it all work. The "I'm every band member" video isn't a bad approach. But I think I'd be far more interested in seeing the process. Maybe if you did a "making of" that went with it. Did you do the drums first? Guitar?
As far as the material goes, it's fine. I don't want to hurt your feelings, because it's not bad. If it was on the radio, I wouldn't change it. But it didn't particularly grab me. Pleasant, but inessential. Better than anything I can do, I can tell you that!
The song itself was far better than the video. I actually enjoyed the singing quite a bit, reminds me of 'MGMT'. Don't give up, keep getting better.
Not a bad song! Pretty catchy. Vocals are a little "kiddie" sounding, but if that's what you're good at, then keep doing it that way. The singing is still better than anything I could do. I'd say just ignore us critics and keep on making music the way you want to make it!!
Good job! Reminds me of the Elephant Six and Kindercore Records era and all those great bands I saw back then. Vocals are great. They don't have to be perfect. You should be proud and keep singing.
Pretty good actually! Like someone said in the comments above, you should make a "making of" for the video! :) I actually think the song isn't that bad! The more you try, the better you'll get! You should post more x)
great job!
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